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When Sarah Tour joins the virtual reality game Eternity she doesn''''t expect much from it. She''''s not a gamer and she has little interest in anything except finding her childhood crush within the game. But she soon realizes that the game has far more to offer than just being a way to stalk her crush.Join Sarah Tour as she journeys through Eternity and makes both friends and foes alike in her adventures.Ps: I was challenged to make a fiction with 500 word(ish) chapters and this is it. Although the chapters are short I encourage you to give it a try or wait for a few updates then give it a try.Please tell me ways I can improve :) (other than chapter length as that is intentional) Statistics Overall Score .star-1299-overall-0f77d326471d4bb4bbcf3cc3878a850c:after{ width: 83.9016% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 7,086 Average Views : 1,181 Followers : 10 Favorites : 0 Ratings : 3 Pages : 19 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Support the author''''s work via Patreon/PayPal Tip on PayPal Become a Patron Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author