By the end of the first week, the new arrivals stopped moving like guests.

  At first they’d walked carefully, voices low, eyes up, as if the Temple might decide they didn’t belong and spit them back into the jungle. Then they learned the small things: which corridor echoed when you ran, which stair stole breath, which door stuck in the humidity unless you leaned your shoulder into it. They learned where water was kept and which cabinet held spare training emitters. Their footsteps began to land in the same familiar scuffs as everyone else’s.

  The Praxeum didn’t grow quieter. It grew busier in a way that felt permanent.

  We were in the main training yard midmorning, heat already settling into the stone. Mixed-cohort blocks were the new normal. Luke and Kam and Kyle couldn’t be everywhere at once, so the older students were used as relays. No titles were handed out; trust did the job.

  ? ? ?

  Meral stood on the mat line with her hands behind her back, calm as if she’d been born there. Her saber hung at her hip, unlit. The new arrivals watched her, some with curiosity, some with the guarded expression of people waiting to see whether the Praxeum was serious or just generous.

  “Standard styles,” Meral said. “Medium, Fast, Heavy. Tools. Don’t turn them into identities. If you treat one like a personality, it’ll betray you.”

  She drew her training blade and demonstrated each in short, clean phrases of movement.

  “Medium,” she said, settling into a balanced guard. “Recovery built into every choice.”

  A few steps, a few cuts. Nothing wasted. The blade returned where it started as if the motion had a memory.

  “Fast,” she continued, weight light, angles tighter. “Initiative. Tempo. You steal space and you pay if you overreach.”

  Her motions shortened. The rhythm quickened. She didn’t chase. She arrived first.

  Then she grounded again, fewer steps, more commitment in her line.

  “Heavy,” Meral said. “Pressure. Leverage. When you choose, you mean it. If you guess wrong, you pay in full.”

  She clipped the blade off. “Pick one for two minutes. Then switch. You learn what it costs.”

  Pairs formed. Old students with arrivals. Small bodies with large. Jaden ended up with a tall Chandrilan who kept apologizing every time their blades touched, as if the sound itself was rude. Jaden’s replies were brief, patient. He corrected his own feet more than he corrected the other boy, and the drills got cleaner anyway.

  Rosh paired with someone smaller and treated every exchange like a scorecard. He pushed too hard, then looked around as if expecting someone to notice. Meral walked past once and tapped his elbow into a better line without stopping.

  “You’re reaching,” she said.

  Rosh snapped, “I’m not—” then saw her expression and swallowed the rest. He adjusted, irritated that his body had listened.

  I watched first. Habit. Or maybe I just liked seeing a room before it decided what it was going to be. Meral moved between pairs, adjusting stances with a fingertip, fixing foot angles, correcting grips. Exact without being cruel. The kind of exact that makes you aware of your own mess without announcing it to the yard.

  The Cathar had been quiet all morning. Older, broad, tawny fur catching sunlight. He watched Meral like she was an answer he didn’t accept.

  “This is your instruction?” he said, loud enough to stop a nearby pair. “A child telling us how to fight.”

  The yard tightened. A few new arrivals leaned in. A few established students went still, waiting to see if this would become a thing.

  Meral stopped. No flinch. No color in her cheeks. She simply looked at him.

  “I’m not a child,” she said.

  “You’re a girl,” he replied, teeth showing. “And younger than half of us.”

  Meral’s gaze stayed level. “If that’s your standard,” she said, “you’re in the wrong place.”

  He stepped forward, tail flicking once behind him. “We didn’t come here to be lectured by—”

  Meral raised one hand, palm open. Quiet stop.

  “Test it,” she said.

  A beat of silence. Then his mouth curved, pleased to have found a door.

  “Gladly.”

  Meral gestured toward the mat. “Training blades. Stun only. Tap-out ends it. You want to challenge the instruction, challenge the instruction.”

  He snapped his blade on like a threat.

  Meral lit hers like a tool.

  “Begin,” Kirana Ti called from the edge of the yard, voice calm but carrying.

  The Cathar came in hard, a downward strike meant to end the argument fast.

  Meral stepped aside, not back. Her blade tapped his wrist. A clear message. He recoiled, surprised, then swung again, broader, trying to force retreat.

  Meral let his momentum spend itself. Tap to shoulder. Tap to elbow. Tap to forearm. Small corrections written on his body in light.

  He snarled and sped up, trying to overwhelm with volume. His feet crossed for a fraction, weight too far forward.

  Meral stole the tempo. She slid inside his line and tapped his hilt. His grip loosened for a blink. Her blade rose and touched his throat.

  Training blades were heatless. Still their sting was unmistakable. He jerked back, offended that his body had listened to danger before his pride did.

  “You’re using tricks,” he snapped.

  “I’m using control,” Meral said. “Again.”

  He widened his stance and committed to pressure, shoulders down, strikes heavier now. He drove her toward the mat edge like he could push the lesson out of the room.

  Meral gave ground three steps, breathing even, letting him feel successful.

  Then she placed her blade against his at an angle that didn’t resist so much as redirect. His heavy strike slid off the line, and his weight carried him past his center.

  Meral’s free hand touched his forearm, a guide more than a shove.|

  His balance broke. He tried to save it by closing and grabbing, turning it personal. Meral let him close, caught his wrist, pivoted, and hooked his ankle.

  He hit the mat on his back with a loud thud, loud and intact.

  Meral remained standing, blade angled down, point hovering over his chest. Her free hand was open, palm lowered as if she could press the air and keep him there.

  “Tap,” she said.

  He hesitated, jaw clenched, then slapped the mat once.

  Meral stepped back immediately and deactivated her blade. The whole exchange had taken less than a minute. There was no cheering. Just a shift. Like a door had closed.

  The Cathar rolled up to his feet, fur bristling, eyes searching for someone to agree with him. No one did. He looked at Meral as if he wanted to say something that would make him taller. Meral beat him to it with a simple nod toward the lanes.

  “Back to drills,” she said. “Medium lane. Swap in two.”

  Training restarted as if the interruption had been a dropped tool, not a public spectacle. The Cathar returned to his lane silent, ears flattened, hands tight on his hilt. Other trainees adjusted without a speech. The yard loosened again.

  I felt a quick surge of satisfaction for Meral. The Cathar had tried to make the room about dominance. Meral had removed the stage. A small part of me flickered with a question: was she more forceful than necessary?

  Then I watched the room settle and the question died. The disruption had been cut off where it started.

  Meral walked the lanes again, voice steady. There was a bright edge to her confidence now, contained but real. A couple of the newer trainees watched her with something like recalibrated respect. Jaden watched too, expression unreadable, as if he was taking notes without admitting he was taking notes.

  ? ? ?

  Afternoons belonged to Toran. After lunch, he left for Wetyin’s Colony in a speeder, tool case in hand. He returned before dinner every day, sometimes thoughtful, sometimes irritated, always driven by something he wouldn’t name. Grease on his sleeve one day, red dust the next. New scratches on his knuckles that didn’t come from sparring. Once I caught him at the edge of the garage, tightening straps on his case like he was preparing for a longer trip.

  “Same time?” I asked.

  “Same time,” he said, and then added, as if he couldn’t help himself, “Different problem.”

  He didn’t elaborate. He lifted the case into the speeder and took off into the green.

  At dinner that night he arrived with his hair damp and his shirt half untucked, eyes bright in the way they got when a machine had finally behaved. He ate quickly, then stared at the wall behind my shoulder like the bolts were still turning in his head.

  Meral tried once to pry it open at the table. “So. Wetyin. Anything you want to confess?”

  Toran smiled and said, “Brag later,” and stole fruit from my plate on the way out.

  The days stacked. Training, meals, repairs, the jungle pressing its damp heat around all of it. Nearly two weeks after the arrivals, a friendly rivalry between the newcomers and senior students had formed like moss on stone. It showed up in small, petty improvements. Cleaner landings. Faster recoveries. Longer holds in a stance. A comment thrown with a smile that meant I see you.

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  Jaden sat near the center of it without trying. He trained hard, listened, adapted. He didn’t perform for attention. That made people watch him more. Rosh performed anyway. Every drill looked like it mattered too much to him. Every compliment aimed elsewhere seemed to land on his teeth.

  One morning Kirana Ti and Mara Jade arrived together, carrying cloth bags. Kirana untied the first and spilled bright fabric bows onto a table. Ten red. Ten blue.

  “This is not combat,” she said. “If you make it combat, you lose.”

  Mara’s mouth curved faintly. “We’re bored.”

  Kirana continued, calm. “Twenty bows hidden around the Praxeum and within the Training Hall. Ten red, ten blue. Retrieve bows for your team and return them to your collection point. No stealing the other team’s bows. No sabotage. No harming anyone. You may use perception. You may use movement. You may use the Force. You may use teamwork. If you forget that last one, you’ll feel it.”

  First division was simple: new arrivals collecting red bows versus senior students looking for blue.

  A murmur ran through the group. Many of the arrivals were older, bigger, more physically mature. People’s eyes measured that and drew the easy conclusion.

  Rosh’s expression sharpened like he’d been handed a chance to rewrite the story. Jaden rolled his shoulders once, loosening. Meral leaned toward me and whispered, “This is a trap.”

  “It’s twenty traps,” I murmured back.

  Kyle leaned against a pillar at the edge of the yard with the relaxed posture of someone who enjoyed watching people run into their own assumptions.

  Kirana lifted her hand. “Begin.”

  The Praxeum turned into motion. Boots pounded stairwells. Trainees scattered into corridors and balconies and the Training Hall entrance in clusters. Bright fabric flashed in shadowed corners like small flags meant to be stolen. Voices rose. Laughter broke out as people nearly collided and had to decide whether to shove past or cooperate.

  I moved without hesitation at turns. The Temple’s geometry lived in my feet. A blue bow tucked behind a vent grate came free with one pull and disappeared into my pocket. Find, commit, return. Waste nothing. Ignore the red stuck high between two stone blocks.

  On a balcony above the yard, another blue bow was knotted to the underside of a handrail, invisible unless you crouched and looked up. I slid my fingers along the stone, felt the fabric, and yanked it loose, then pivoted and sprinted before anyone else could notice the movement.

  In the Training Hall, walls had shifted into dead ends and new connections. The air cooled in the stone. The rules were simple and the space was not.

  Toran, of course, went somewhere he shouldn’t. He shouldered open a service hatch with a grunt and vanished into a maintenance corridor like he’d been built for crawling through tight places. I heard him swear once when he banged his shoulder, then heard him laugh at himself like it was part of the contest. When he reappeared, he had a blue bow in his fist and sweat on his brow, still moving as if being winded was a rumor.

  A heavier obstacle slid into place behind him, sealing a corridor.

  Toran didn’t stop. He grabbed the edge of the panel, planted his feet, and hauled. The panel shifted just enough for him to wedge through. He came out the other side with his shirt ripped at the shoulder and didn’t even glance down.

  Meral solved the problem differently. Two blue bows sat on opposite ends of a precarious high ledge. Some tried jumping with Force propelling them high, but lacked the control — and the smoothed stone blocks punished sloppiness. Others started climbing, fingers scrabbling for purchase, bodies wasting time in cautious fear of falling.

  Meral lifted a hand and floated several smaller pavement blocks into the air, stacking them into temporary steps. The blocks wobbled slightly under her weight, held by her focus. She ran up lightly, snatched the bows, and dropped back down before the blocks thudded on the ground again.

  Two trainees stared at her like she’d cheated.

  Meral flashed a grin and said, “Try thinking,” then ran.

  Jaden saw it, paused half a breath, then smiled as if he respected the ingenuity more than the advantage. He kept moving, gathering red bows like a puzzle he refused to resent. I watched him take a wrong turn, stop instantly, reverse without complaint, and still come out ahead because he didn’t argue with reality.

  Rosh didn’t gather well. He chased. He tried to win by being seen winning. He wasted time blocking routes that didn’t need blocking and glaring at people who weren’t even on his team. At one intersection he tried to shoulder past Jaden as Jaden reached for a bow hidden in a wall niche. Jaden shifted his weight, slid aside, and took the bow anyway. He kept it quiet, almost polite. He refused to be pushed into Rosh’s pace. Rosh’s face tightened, and he ran harder, like speed could punish the idea of being ignored.

  Then a crackling noise sounded across the Praxeum. At first I thought it was a training alert. Then Serrin Or’nel’s voice came through the speakers with manic glee.

  “Welcome to the first Jedi Bow Hunt, dear fans! Two teams competing for a mysterious prize — what will it be? While you’re thinking about that, let’s have a look at the playing field — oh right, that’s the entire Praxeum! No stone is to be left unturned, what a brilliant opportunity to cause glorious chaos sponsored by our very own Jedi Council! And we have runners on the north stairwell!” Serrin shouted. “I repeat, runners. One of them just vaulted a railing, and I would like to state for the record that I did not encourage that.”

  Someone in the corridor barked a laugh and yelled, “Serrin!”

  Meral laughed mid-stride and nearly stumbled. She caught herself, then kept running faster, like the embarrassment fueled her.

  Serrin barreled on. “Entering the Training Hall now. Bold choice. Possibly stupid. Telekinesis is in play, people. Just in case you’ve missed it, there were floating stone blocks involved. I am reporting this as neutral journalism.”

  Mara’s voice snapped through a speaker, sharp as a blade edge. “Serrin, stop broadcasting.”

  Serrin sounded wounded. “This is a public service.”

  “Stop,” Mara repeated but her voice cracked in laughter.

  Serrin lowered his voice by a single useless fraction. “I hear you, oh Terrifying One. I disagree.”

  Somewhere nearby, a trainee shouted, “Shut up!” and Serrin replied instantly, “No!”

  The contest turned into a moving web. You could feel it even without seeing everything. People learned each other’s patterns on the fly. Who sprinted straight and burned out. Who cut corners. Who stopped to help and lost time, then gained it back when the other person returned the favor. The new arrivals had strength. The established students had familiarity and a kind of practiced stubbornness that comes from having already bled on Yavin and returned to train anyway. Over all that, Serrin’s commentary and his occasional bickering with Mara created a backdrop that pulled everyone into the event, not just the competing teams.

  I returned two bows to our crate, then went out again. Leaving points on the board felt wrong. On my third run I found a blue bow tied to a low branch just outside the yard wall, half hidden in leaves. Someone had gotten clever with the jungle itself.

  I took it and ran, breath steady, feet sure. The Praxeum blurred into angles and light and stone.

  The contest ended in a rush of fabric and breath.

  Kirana kept time and track of the bows. Mara watched faces instead of totals. Kyle watched everything with the grin of a man who enjoyed watching pride get sanded down.

  Senior students won the first run by a narrow margin — a couple of seconds — but it was enough.

  Rosh’s frustration went straight to his mouth. “They’ve had more time,” he said loudly. “They know the place. Of course they win.”

  A few arrivals murmured agreement, eager to have an excuse. Others looked embarrassed by him, which only made him tighter.

  Jaden wiped sweat from his brow and looked at the crates like they were honest evidence. “They also did things I wouldn’t have thought of,” he said, calm. He nodded toward where Meral’s shortcut had been. “That was clever.”

  Meral’s grin snapped bright. “Thanks.”

  Jaden nodded once, accepting it without awkwardness.

  Kyle waited until the room’s anticipation peaked, until the winners looked around for the reward that always follows effort. Then he grinned wide.

  “All right,” he said. “Prize time.”

  The yard quieted.

  Kyle spread his hands. “The prize for winning is — exactly nothing.”

  Silence. Then laughter burst out, groans and mock outrage, tension bleeding away like air from a punctured bladder.

  Serrin’s voice chimed in, delighted. “Congratulations to the winners on their valuable prize. I will accept donations of nothing at my usual location.”

  Mara’s eyes narrowed toward the ceiling speaker. “Serrin, show’s over. One more word and I’ll shave you while you’re asleep.”

  His voice went small. “Understood.”

  ? ? ?

  The contest repeated because it worked. Teams were reshuffled. Mixed groups. Instructor-drafted squads. Random names pulled from a bag. One day I ended up on a team with a new arrival who’d never been in a jungle before and kept slapping at insects mid-run. Another day Jaden was on my side and we barely spoke, just moved, handing off bows at the crate with quick nods like we’d practiced it for years.

  Each run forced people to share space without treating it like territory. New arrivals stopped clustering only with each other. Established students stopped treating them like visitors. It happened in jokes and shared shortcuts and the small relief of realizing you didn’t have to prove yourself every second.

  Rosh improved on some days. On others he made himself a problem again. Jaden stayed steady, training hard without letting the game own him.

  Toran kept leaving for Wetyin every afternoon. Sometimes he returned satisfied, quiet glow under the fatigue. Sometimes he returned with his jaw tight as if a bolt had insulted him. Either way, the engine inside him kept running.

  ? ? ?

  The debate rose one evening in the top hall, after the air finally cooled and the day’s sweat had dried. People sat on the floor, leaned against pillars, perched on ledges. Luke sat near the back like anyone else, hands resting on his knees. He didn’t speak. He didn’t guide. He watched the room learn itself.

  The conversation started with jokes about Kyle’s nothing prize and Serrin’s commentary. Serrin got pelted with fruit again and declared it proof of his influence. Then it drifted to training, as it always did.

  A tired-looking girl asked, “I keep hearing ‘trust your instincts’ and ‘follow the form’ in the same hour. Which is it?”

  Jaden answered first. “Both,” he said. “Doctrine exists for a reason. Instinct can be wrong.”

  Another student replied, “Doctrine can be wrong too.”

  Jaden nodded, accepting the point. “Sure. But doctrine gives you a baseline. Something repeatable. Without it, you’re improvising and hoping your intuition is smarter than the room.”

  A few people murmured agreement. A few shifted, unconvinced.

  Rosh spoke up, voice edged. “It’s easy to preach patience when you’ve had years here.”

  A couple of heads snapped toward him. The room tightened for a heartbeat, expecting sparks.

  Jaden didn’t rise to it. “It’s not preaching,” he said. “It’s survival.”

  Meral snorted softly. “Survival is also knowing when rules are too slow.”

  That earned a few smiles from the senior students’ side.

  Someone asked, “So what, you just do whatever feels right?”

  Kirana’s voice cut in, calm. “You do what you can justify with your body and your awareness. Feelings don’t carry you through a bad landing.”

  Jaden’s attention shifted toward me. I felt it before I saw it.

  “What do you think, Kae’rin?” he asked.

  I exhaled once. “Doctrine is useful,” I said. “It’s a map. But maps don’t keep up with weather.”

  Jaden’s gaze held mine, attentive. “You’re saying instinct matters more.”

  “I’m saying reality matters more,” I replied. “Doctrine can make you late if you wait for the moment to match the lesson.”

  Jaden leaned forward slightly. “New students don’t have your experience. Doctrine matters more for them — us.”

  “That’s fair,” I said.

  “And you move like you’re certain,” he added, as if stating a detail he’d been holding. “That certainty isn’t something everyone has.”

  I didn’t deny it. I also didn’t explain it.

  “I move,” I said. “Then I adjust.”

  Jaden nodded slowly, filing it away.

  Meral spoke once, voice light but edged. “Some people don’t get the luxury of learning slowly.”

  Kyle grinned from somewhere off to the side and said nothing. Mara watched the exchange like she was judging the sharpness of steel. Kirana listened with patient eyes. Luke listened too, letting the friction exist without rushing to smooth it.

  ? ? ?

  The debate didn’t end with a winner. It loosened into smaller arguments, quieter talk, shared laughter, and the simple exhaustion that comes after people show each other their minds. When the hall emptied, I stepped onto the terrace. Jungle air cooled my face. Stars over Yavin were sharp and indifferent.

  Inside, the Praxeum hummed with life, with new currents finding their places in old channels.

  I stood a moment longer than necessary.

  Then I went back in.

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