Chapter 98 — The City Merchant
The wind from the coast carried the smell of tar and salt long before the city walls appeared. Litus Solis, carved against the black rock and backed by the endless sea, rose like a crown of weather-stained stone. Its battlements shimmered with heat and gull cries, and the long pennants over the western tower cracked in the breeze.
A watchman on the parapet shaded his eyes.
“Captain,” he called down, “armed group on the southern road—one mounted, one more with him, the rest on foot. Pulling a cart.”
The gate captain, a broad man with a creased brow, stepped out to the portcullis and squinted through the glare. “Armed, you say?”
“Aye,” came the answer. “Looks like a knight at their head.”
“Then open the outer gate, but keep the bolts drawn,” the captain said. “Let’s see what sort of knight wanders in with peddlers and priests.”
The group drew closer: Sir Dathren in his travel-stained tabard, helm hanging from the saddle, his sergeant riding beside him. Behind them trudged the rest of the party—Mirelle walking beside the handcart, Brother Renn in his gray robes, and two men guiding the creaking wheels loaded with sacks, barrels, and bundles wrapped in oilcloth, while the last four soldiers brought up the rear. The guards at the gate shifted uneasily; travelers came often enough, but not in such a mismatched company.
“Halt!” the captain called. “State your business in Litus Solis.”
Dathren drew his horse to a stop and inclined his head. “I am Dathren of the Heartland. I come from the north with goods to trade and seek my kin—the House Bargiani, merchants of the lower quarter. My mother was of their blood.”
At that, the captain’s expression softened a degree. “Bargiani… the coastal line. Your family holds lands westward, do they not?”
“Aye,” said Dathren. “And my road leads homeward through their door.”
The captain gestured to a guard to look over the cart. The man lifted a canvas flap, peering at the contents. “Sacks, smoked meats, barrels,” he murmured, then rapped his knuckles on one of the casks. “What’s in these?”
“Water,” Mirelle answered before Dathren could speak. “Pure water, drawn from the springs of the north.”
The guard frowned. “Water? You haul water into a port city?”
Dathren only smiled faintly. “Better to drink what one knows.”
The captain’s mouth twitched, ready to question further—until his gaze caught on Brother Renn standing beside the cart, calm and still as the tide.
“By the seas,” he muttered. “A priest of the Veils?”
The change in tone was instant. The younger guards stiffened, one shifting his grip on his halberd. The southern cities had little love for the priests; too many bad memories and unwanted sermons.
Renn bowed slightly. “I am.” He reached into his robe and drew forth a folded parchment sealed in blue wax. “My license of tribute—paid in full under the seal of Lord Eldric of Avalon. I walked with his caravan this past season.”
The captain took the paper, brows lifting. “Lord Eldric himself?”
“Aye,” said Renn. “He gave the blessing—and took it in turn.”
The men exchanged uneasy looks. One of the guards stepped forward. “If you are a priest, then where is your mark? I see no ash band, no sun seal.”
Renn’s smile widened, bright and dangerous. “This day,” he said, voice low but clear, “I serve the Vale of Avalon—these walls, these souls, this breath of the living world. That is my mark.”
The words hung heavy in the air, like heat before a storm.
Dathren exhaled, dry humor returning to his voice. “Captain, if you let him finish that thought, we’ll be here till sunset. We’ve coin to spend and no wish to stir a sermon.”
That broke the tension. The captain handed back the parchment, nodding once. “You may pass, sir knight. But keep your peace inside our walls.”
“As long as peace keeps with us,” Dathren replied.
The gates creaked open. As the company stepped through, the captain leaned to his sergeant. “Mark their passage,” he murmured. “A knight, a priest, and traders all on one road. Strange company.”
The sergeant scribbled a quick note in the day-book and watched the small group vanish into the crowded, sun-drenched streets of Litus Solis.
Within the walls, the city pulsed with color and noise—spice and sweat, hawkers calling over the clatter of hooves. Stone streets sloped downward toward the harbor, where gulls shrieked over a forest of masts.
Brother Renn’s pace slowed. His gaze roved toward the sound of laughter and crying alike—market children, pale-faced women selling herbs by the curb. His voice dropped to a murmur. “Here. This is where I’m needed.”
Dathren turned in the saddle. “We’ll meet you at the House of Bargiani before nightfall. Try not to start a sermon on the steps.”
Renn smiled. “No sermon, sir. Only a blessing.”
And with that, he slipped away into the throng, robes brushing the stones, already speaking to the nearest child who watched him with wide, hungry eyes.
Mirelle watched him go. “He’s brave,” she said.
“Or foolish,” Dathren muttered. Then, with a breath, “Come. The merchants will not wait, and we’ve goods to gain.”
They turned down toward the quarter of trade, the smell of the dock and city rising on the wind—their cart creaking under the weight of the Hollow’s hope.
The streets of Litus Solis grew narrower as they wound uphill from the gate. The city changed character here—the tar and salt of the docks giving way to the copper scent of trade and perfume. Painted shutters, red-tiled roofs, the cries of criers and bargemen in the distance—all muffled beneath the hum of trade.
Sir Dathren reined in before a large, sand-colored townhouse whose frontage bore a gilded sign: “House Bargiani & Sons — Traders of Fine Oils, Wines, and Maritime Goods.”
The windows glowed with lamplight despite the hour, and the noise within was unmistakable—a clamor of voices raised in argument, chairs scraping against marble tile.
But before they could dismount, Mirelle’s sharp eyes caught motion at the periphery.
“Three men,” she murmured. “Alley corners. Watching us.”
Dathren turned slightly, catching a flash of cloaked shoulders as the figures melted back into the shadows.
He muttered under his breath, “Too well-dressed for beggars, too calm for thieves. Keep your eyes open.”
As they reached the front steps, two guards leaned on the main door—both half-asleep, their focus inward, where the noise of debate carried.
Dathren’s tone hardened. “Sergeant—four men with the cart. Stay sharp. Keep the horses.”
The sergeant saluted briskly. “Aye, my lord.”
Leaving them outside, Dathren dismounted. He glanced once at Mirelle, who adjusted her satchel. Together, they pushed open the great oak door.
The air hit hard, thick and buzzing, almost like stepping into an oven. Everyone talked over each other—merchants, clerks, and a pair of men in velvet getting heated over numbers scrawled on parchment. Then the door closed behind the newcomers, and suddenly, the noise just stopped. Every head swiveled.
Up front, the youngest clerk looked up from his ledger, blinking. His eyes went wide when he saw them: a knight, armor still streaked with dust from the road, standing next to a woman in a soldier's uniform.
Without a word, the boy darted from his stool and scurried toward a polished oak door at the back of the hall. He rapped sharply—three quick knocks.
From within came a woman’s voice, cool and irritated:
“I told you not to disturb me again for trifles.”
“Forgive me, Mistress,” the clerk stammered, “but—a knight, madam. In the store.”
There was a pause. Then a quiet, incredulous reply:
“A knight?”
Footsteps. A rustle of skirts. The door opened.
Out stepped a woman in her middle years, elegant and deliberate even in haste. Her gown was finely cut, her hair pinned with silver combs that caught the lamplight. The look on her face—first concern, then dawning recognition—softened the room.
“Dathren,” she breathed.
He bowed his head slightly, lips curving in respect. “Aunt Alessandra.”
But her gaze shifted past him—to Mirelle, whose calm expression carried both familiarity and quiet command.
The light in Alessa’s eyes changed. Recognition faltered, replaced by something more guarded—something nearer to disappointment.
“You bring strange company, nephew,” she said carefully, tone neither welcoming nor rejecting.
Dathren straightened. “Aye, Aunt. But their business may soon be yours.”
The hall, still watching, seemed to lean in closer. Outside, one of the horses stamped and snorted—a reminder that the world beyond these walls had teeth.
Inside her merchant's heart, Alessandra felt politics and blood were about to mix again.
The noise of the hall dimmed behind them as Alessa Bargiani ushered the visitors through the carved door into her private office. The room was orderly but tense—ledgers stacked in disciplined rows, maps of trade routes pinned against a sun-faded wall, a single crystal lamp burning with a pale, steady flame. The scent of ink and paper lingered in the air.
“Please,” Alessa said with the smooth tone of habit. “Sit, if you’ve business worth discussing. I warn you—time is short. My house has troubles enough without taking on the curiosities of travelers.”
Her words were polite, but her eyes stayed guarded. She was a merchant born and bred; hospitality cost nothing, but trust was silver.
Dathren inclined his head. “We would not trouble you long, my lady. My companions bring an offer for trade—one I think will interest you.”
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“That so?” she said, arching a brow. Her glance flicked toward Mirelle, appraising her plain clothes, ink-stained fingers, and calm face. “And the lady is… your clerk? Your scribe? Or a nun fallen on hard times?”
Dathren’s mouth twitched. “She speaks for me in this matter.”
Alessa’s lips curved faintly—half amusement, half disbelief. “Then I suppose the lady may speak.”
Mirelle met that scrutiny with poise that would have suited any court. “We wish to barter for provisions,” she said evenly. “Foodstuffs—grain, vegetables, cloth for clothing, blankets, tools for the forge, and glazes if you can find them. Materials for crafts and dwelling—nothing exotic, but all necessary.”
Alessa leaned back in her chair, fingers steepled. “You describe the pantry of a small village, not the needs of a trade house. And what,” she asked pointedly, “would you offer in exchange?”
“We have it with us,” Mirelle said. “In our cart.”
The faintest flicker of disappointment crossed Alessa’s features. One cart. Hardly the talk of serious commerce. But blood bound her to the knight, and family courtesy ran deeper than her irritation.
“I see,” she said smoothly. “And what does this mysterious cart of yours contain?”
“It would be better if we showed you.”
Alessa gestured toward the door, skepticism still sharpening her tone. “Then by all means, enlighten me.”
Dathren rose and gave a quiet order. Moments later, one of his soldiers stepped in, awkwardly lugging a large burlap sack that landed with a heavy thump on the tiled floor.
The sound was wrong—not the soft slither of grain or the dull knock of dried fruit—a thick, compact weight. Alessa’s brows drew together.
Mirelle, calm as ever, took out a small knife, slit a corner of the stitching, and reached inside. Her pale hand emerged cupping a handful of gleaming white granules. She poured them onto the polished surface of Alessa’s desk.
The merchant’s eyes widened.
Salt.
Not the gray, coarse brine-crusted salt of the docks, nor the yellowed blocks dragged up from the flats—but snow-white, dry, and pure. Imperial-grade. She stared at the sack and quickly asked them to place it on the large scale. It exceeded 50lb.
Mirelle watched the shift in her expression; it was almost comical: disbelief first, then realization, then the sharp glint of calculation. She touched a finger to the pile, rubbed it between thumb and forefinger, and then—hesitant, almost reverent—tasted it.
Her eyes flicked upward, glittering with both shock and hunger.
“This,” she murmured, “is not dock salt. Where did you…?” She stopped herself, professionalism reasserting its mask. “No matter.” Her tone softened, growing warm, smooth as oil. “And how many of these sacks did you say you have?”
“Four,” Mirelle replied. “For now. But we can supply this amount—or more—on a regular schedule.”
Alessa rose halfway from her seat, then caught herself and sat again, composing her face into gracious calm. These people had just dropped a sack worth 700 silver coins of salt in her lap and had three more just like it in the cart out her door. With all these sacks, it was enough to buy a small ship. A small, practiced smile replaced her astonishment.
“I think,” she said at last, her voice honeyed and precise, “we can do business.”
A beat of silence followed before Dathren’s grin broke it.
“I thought that might interest you, Aunt.”
She gave him a look equal parts reproach and admiration. “Interest me? My dear boy, if what you say is true, it might just save me.”
From the corner, Mirelle’s calm voice interjected, “Then perhaps, my lady, we shall both find what we seek.”
For the first time that day, Alessa Bargiani laughed—a quick, silvery sound that held both relief and danger in its music.
…
The front of the merchant house was emptied with startling speed. Apprentices ushered customers out with hasty bows; shutters were drawn, and the arguing merchants from before found themselves quietly dismissed into the street.
Alessa Bargiani stood at the window for a long moment, arms folded as she watched Sir Dathren’s soldiers pull the cart into the gated courtyard. The iron gate clanged shut, and the sound echoed up the stone alley like a tolling bell.
When she turned back, her face was composed again—but the brightness in her eyes betrayed that her mind was racing.
“Let’s see these wonders, shall we?”
The soldiers unfastened the cart cover. She stepped closer, skirts brushing the cobbles, studying each sack and barrel. The salted meat drew her attention first.
“Dried pork,” she murmured. “Well-cured. That alone fetches a tidy sum this season.” She crouched, running a hand along the nearest cask. “And these? What’s in them?”
“Water,” Mirelle answered.
Alessa looked up, her expression turning almost incredulous. “Water? From where, the heavens?”
“The springs north of the hollow,” Mirelle said evenly. “It’s pure. No brine, no rot, no taint of the sea.”
That gave the merchant pause. Her tone softened into something halfway between wonder and suspicion. “Clean water… in the south?”
She stood, brushing her hands off. “If you’re lying, you’ve a dangerous tongue. If you’re telling the truth, then you’ve stumbled on fortune itself.”
Inside again, they gathered around the long oak table. A quiet tension hung between the two women like drawn silk—each smiling, each weighing the other with the care of fencers measuring distance before a lunge.
“So,” Alessa began, folding her hands. “You bring me meat, salt, and water. And you wish…?”
“Provisions,” Mirelle replied. “Food—grain, vegetables, simple things. Cloth. Tools for the forge. Copper for the tradesmen. Clay glaze, if you can find it. Household goods enough to sustain a small settlement.” She drew out her wax tablet and stylus, the movement quick, practiced. “Also—ashes from the volcano, if they can be had.”
Alessa’s brows rose. “Ashes? What for—ritual?”
“By the ton for the land,” Mirelle said softly. “Ash renews.”
The merchant tilted her head, intrigued but cautious. “Ash can be arranged. But copper, cloth, food—all that requires coin. My coin, if I’m to front the work. And my coin is… strained.”
“Strained?”
Alessa let the word hang, the faintest crack showing through her mask. “The farms in the west suffer. Raiders, water shortages, and other issues have affected output. Even my own landholdings have gone half-fallow. And within the city—” she stopped herself, shaking her head. “Let us say, the cost of keeping the guard paid grows every week.”
Mirelle nodded, unflinching. “Then we will not ask for charity. You name fair prices for these items, and we will supply more salt and meat in return. And water.”
At that, Alessa’s smile returned—a little sharper now. “Ah, so we circle back to the miracle springs. How far north did you say they were?”
“I didn’t,” Mirelle replied, tone smooth as poured honey.
A laugh slipped from Alessa despite herself. “Clever woman.”
“And you?” Mirelle countered lightly. “You’ve not yet told me what holds your western farms. Raiders, drought, or something else?”
For a heartbeat, Alessa said nothing. Then she sighed, the sound half weary, half bitter. “Rot of the earth,” she said. “Too much salt in the water near the coast, too much harvest to store, corruption in the city’s heart”
Silence settled between them again. The sounds of the city bled faintly through the shutters—gulls crying, distant hammering from the wharf.
At last, Alessa leaned forward and tapped the pile of salt still gleaming on her desk.
“This,” she said, “may buy us both time.”
Mirelle met her gaze evenly. “And perhaps something greater than time.”
Alessa held her stare a moment longer, then laughed again, this time softly and sincerely. “Veils preserve me, woman. You bargain like a noble.”
“You wish to trade, yes? But you’ll find few here who can pay fair coin for it. Salt this pure—one bag might fetch seven hundred silver in the merchant quarter. I will trade in barter, but it will take time, and I would have to be careful lest the thieves come thick and fast.
She leaned back, tapping the table with a long, lacquered nail, hoping this woman understood. “If you require coin quickly, let me find a rich merchant—someone who lives by indulgence, not prudence. Sell him one sack at full weight, let him brag about it at dinner. Let him believe he’s cornered a miracle. He’ll pay handsomely for the privilege.”
Mirelle tilted her head. “And the rest?”
“Let's hold them. Let the city hunger for more.” Alessa’s eyes gleamed. “Let the price swell like the tide. Then, when you bring more, you dictate terms. You’ll have every trader on the coast clawing at your door.”
Sir Dathren gave a quiet laugh. “You’re as shrewd as I remember, Aunt.”
She smiled faintly. “I am alive because I am shrewd. And you—” she looked back to Mirelle—“you’re not as simple as you seem. You already knew this, didn’t you?”
“I knew salt was worth more than silver when people starve for clean food and clean water,” Mirelle replied. “I did not know how the game was played.”
“The game,” Alessa said, “is patience—and pretense.” Her tone softened. “If you supply this regularly, the value will settle, yes. But not much. The coast’s been running on brine and rot for years. Salt this pure isn’t just going to shake up trade—it’s going to move power around. And honestly,” she said, glancing at both of them, “that’s more dangerous than pirates.”
No one said a word.
Mirelle didn’t flinch. “Then we sell it carefully.”
Alessa gave a single nod, her usual charm giving way to a flash of respect. “Exactly. Let the fools gorge themselves on the first batch.”
While they spend their silver quickly, we’ll be counting gold within a year.”
Sir Dathren exhaled slowly, watching the two women—merchant and scribe—circle each other like twin stars around something neither yet named.
“You two will ruin the market before the season’s done,” he said with a grin.
Alessa shot him a look both sharp and amused. “Then it’s a good thing ruin can be profitable.”
“No!” declared Mirelle. “It is not his method to ruin the city or coast but to fix it.”
Alessa’s question cut through the air like a blade.
“His?” she repeated, eyes narrowing. “Who is he—and what are his designs?”
The tone was sharper than curiosity; it was the instinct of a merchant who had survived too many veiled schemes and noble promises.
Both Mirelle and Sir Dathren hesitated—only for a heartbeat, but long enough for her trained senses to catch it. Their eyes flicked to each other, the smallest of glances, too brief for most to see.
Then Mirelle inclined her head slightly toward the knight. “Perhaps,” she said carefully, “you should explain.”
Dathren smiled with that effortless grace that only those raised among noble courts could manage. “He,” he said quietly, “is our benefactor—and, in this, your benefactor as well. He has a greater initiative—to see prosperity return to the people, the city, and the lands of the Blue Coast.”
Alessa laughed—a rich, incredulous sound. “It sounds like a child with grandiose dreams. The coast is rotting from within, Ser Dathren. No idealist will mend it.”
The knight’s smile did not falter. His gaze met hers, steady and strange. “The truth,” he said softly, “is far worse. All his dreams are realistic.”
That stilled the air.
Alessa blinked, her amusement fading as she saw something behind his expression—a quiet conviction that chilled rather than comforted. “Realistic?” she echoed, half-skeptical, half-curious.
Dathren nodded. “Every impossible thing we thought he could not do, he has done—the dead soil blooms. The broken bathe flows with healing water. The people who had nothing now build homes and forges. He dreams, my lady—but when he wakes, the dream stands solid beneath his feet.”
The words lingered in the stillness of the room. Even Alessa, master of masks, felt something stir—a pulse of awe she quickly buried under calculation.
Mirelle added softly, her voice threaded with quiet pride, “He does not rule. He builds. And those who follow him begin to believe that what is broken can be made whole again.”
Alessa turned to the window, watching the courtyard where the sacks of salt gleamed faintly in the sun. She felt, absurdly, as though the air had shifted.
“So,” she murmured, more to herself than to them. “A benefactor who dreams true.”
Dathren gave a slow nod. “And soon, the world will have to learn to dream with him—or be swept aside by those who do.”
For a long moment, the only sound in the room was the faint hum of the street beyond the shutters. Then Alessa smiled, though her eyes were distant.
Alessa’s eyes glinted, a spark of daring beneath her composed exterior.
“Then perhaps,” she said slowly, “I should start learning. But I must see it.”
She rose, each word deliberate, her voice gaining strength.
“If this benefactor of yours builds and bends dreams into stone and soil, then let him prove it. In the west lie my family’s estates—lands once rich, now weary. Have him make them flower again so that they can live. Then I will believe.”
A faint, knowing smile curved her lips.
“Otherwise,” she said, settling back into her chair, “I remain only your merchant.”
“Very well, we will take your offer back,” said Mirelle. “We will leave two bags of Salt for one thousand Silver coins' worth of goods.”
The tension eased as she gestured toward the window where the last light of day was thinning into dusk. She insisted they remain in her household that night—ostensibly for security, to protect the cart and its precious cargo—but beneath her composed words was a current of curiosity she could no longer deny.
By the time the courtyard quieted and servants doused the lamps, Alessa thought she had seen all the strangeness these travelers had to offer. Yet when the knock came upon her door—measured, solemn—and a priest of the Veils stepped across her threshold, his robes catching the lantern glow, she realized they were all bound together.
For a long moment, she stood in silence, watching them greet one another like old companions reunited under fate’s hand.
And she thought, not without a tremor of apprehension,
What have I gotten myself involved in?

