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The Knock in the Rain

  Chapter Seventy Two – The Knock in the Rain

  The storm did not let up.

  Rain hammered the shelter roof like a thousand frantic fingers. Thunder rolled again and again, shaking the boards beneath their boots. Lightning flashed in quick, jagged bursts that lit the forest like a camera flash gone wild.

  Jess huddled in her sleeping bag like a burrito. Marco paced the back wall, muttering, “We live here now.” SleepisforT sat cross?legged, calm but watchful. SkyWaker attempted to teach Sir Quacksworth deep?breathing exercises. Riley kept a lantern lit, her eyes scanning the tree line every few minutes.

  Fleta sat near the front, hugging her knees. Storms still made her alert — tense — but not panicked. Not frozen.

  She listened to the roar of rain on the roof, letting it be what it was: weather. Not threat. Not memory. Just the sky being loud.

  Lightning cracked again, closer this time.

  Jess squeaked. “That one felt personal.”

  Riley opened her mouth to respond—

  But she never got the chance.

  A shape appeared in the storm.

  A silhouette stumbling down the trail, barely visible through the sheets of rain. The figure lurched sideways, caught themselves on a tree trunk, then kept struggling forward.

  Marco froze. “Uh… guys?”

  Fleta’s breath hitched — not from fear, but concern.

  The figure staggered closer.

  A soaked jacket. A floppy, drenched hat. A backpack hanging off one shoulder. Feet slipping in the mud.

  And then—

  A weak, trembling voice:

  “Is—someone—there?”

  Riley stood instantly. “Yes! Shelter’s here! Keep coming!”

  Lightning illuminated the figure just long enough for all of them to see:

  A young hiker — maybe nineteen — pale, shaking, soaked through to the bone, eyes wide with fear and exhaustion. A long scrape ran down one arm, smeared with mud. Their breathing came in sharp, shallow gasps.

  Fleta jumped to her feet without thinking.

  The hiker stumbled onto the shelter’s platform and collapsed to their knees, coughing hard.

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  Jess scrambled to fetch her emergency blanket. Marco grabbed a dry jacket. SleepisforT moved closer with her water bottle. SkyWaker stood protectively beside the newcomer like a neon?clad guardian.

  Riley crouched and put a steady hand on the hiker’s back. “Hey. You’re okay now. You made it. What’s your name?”

  The hiker swallowed hard.

  “Lark,” they whispered. “Trail name Lark.”

  Fleta knelt beside Riley. “Lark… are you hurt?”

  Lark shivered violently. “Fell… back on the ridge. Mudslide. Lost my footing. Thought—” Their voice cracked. “Thought I wasn’t gonna make it.”

  Fleta’s chest tightened.

  Not with fear — with empathy. She knew that feeling. She’d nearly lived that feeling on the ridge days ago.

  Jess wrapped the emergency blanket around Lark’s shoulders. “Here. Warm up first.”

  Marco offered the dry jacket. “You’re safe now. Storm can’t get you here.”

  SkyWaker handed Lark Sir Quacksworth with great ceremony. “THE DUCK PROVIDES COURAGE.”

  Lark blinked in surprise — then let out a small, shaky laugh. “Th?thank you.”

  Riley gently guided Lark deeper into the shelter. “Any head hits? Any dizziness?”

  Lark shook their head. “Just… scared. And cold.”

  SleepisforT handed over her water bottle. “Sip. Slowly.”

  Lark took a small sip, hands shaking too hard to hide.

  Fleta sat beside them, quiet but close. She didn’t touch Lark. Didn’t pressure. Just offered presence.

  “You did the brave thing,” Fleta said softly. “You kept moving even when it was terrifying.”

  Lark looked at her with damp, grateful eyes. “I didn’t want to stop. But I couldn’t see. And the mud… it pulled me.”

  Fleta nodded. “I know.” Her voice barely a whisper. “I felt that before too.”

  Lark swallowed. “I didn’t think I’d make it.”

  “But you did,” Fleta said gently. “You got here. You found us. You’re safe.”

  Riley placed a hand on Fleta’s shoulder, quiet acknowledgment passing between them.

  Outside, thunder shook the sky again — but inside the shelter, something steadier held the group together.

  Jess made room for Lark near her sleeping bag. Marco gathered all the dry socks he could find. SkyWaker performed a dramatic “welcome ceremony” that involved waving Sir Quacksworth in the air like a holy relic. SleepisforT brewed warm tea on her stove. Riley checked Lark’s vitals one more time.

  And Fleta?

  She stayed right beside Lark.

  Not because Lark needed saving— but because she knew what it felt like to arrive somewhere frightened, shaking, and unsure of your place…

  …only to have someone reach out and say:

  You belong here.

  Lark leaned back against the shelter wall, wrapped in warmth now, breathing steadier.

  They whispered, “Thank you.”

  Fleta smiled softly.

  “We look out for each other on the trail.”

  Lightning split the sky again — bright but distant now.

  The storm continued to rage.

  But inside the shelter, the group formed their own kind of weather:

  Warm. Safe. Steady.

  A refuge for anyone who needed it.

  And Fleta realized something as she settled beside her friends, watching Lark drift into exhausted sleep:

  Helping others didn’t just give her strength.

  It reminded her who she was becoming.

  StillMoving. Still healing. Still growing strong enough to offer shelter of her own.

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