I would like to ask for opinions and help with the story.

  Attached you will find a poll. Feel free to use it or not. I realize I need to apply a lot of polish to the chapters I have so far. I intend to keep writing more new content before putting too much time into that. What I am asking for is feedback. Please let me know if there is something that has been grating on your nerves. (aside from the bad grammar and clear need for more editing.) I would like to address those issues quickly and make the reading experience as enjoyable as possible. If you select other I would appreciate a comment that elaborates.

  This book's true home is on another platform. Check it out there for the real experience.

  Thank you,

  Talver